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Months ago
You told me
You didnt love me
Anymore

And you broke my heart

The men before you
Hurt me deep
I thought you
Were different

But you hurt me just the same

You were the first
I came to trust
I gave you my heart
And you broke it

Can I ever trust again?

Months ago
You hurt me
But I still feel
The pain

Will my heart ever heal?

I cry at night
For my broken heart
For my lost love
For my lost life

I long to live again

I dream of others
But memories
Can still hurt
From months ago

Are the others just like you?

I want a man
Yet I wonder
Are they all
The same?

Will every other guy hurt me like you did?

So I cry
I dream
I pray
All night

Pray there is something else in store for my broken heart
©2006-2008 ~fallencity
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It's been months since he broke up with me, but some nights I still suffer the pain of it all. Last night was like that.

Please be nice
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~TearsOfTorment:iconTearsOfTorment: Jun 14, 2006, 6:29:08 PM
I can totally relate. :heart:

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You're so crazy,
Enough in a way that
I'll probably say you destroyed me.
-The Used
~boo-88:iconboo-88: Jun 14, 2006, 10:19:58 PM
i know the feeling well.. great work.. i like it lots :hug: :+fav:

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Love is not a snooze button on your alarm clock because when it goes off the first time in the morning the thought of your loved one makes it impossible to fall back asleep
~Icyblues:iconIcyblues: Jun 15, 2006, 4:42:08 AM
I know the feeling well...
I'm sorry hun.
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.x Let the teardrops as they fall, tell their story x.
~fallencity:iconfallencity: Jun 16, 2006, 6:19:41 PM
sall good - feels good to get it out

:hug:

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Flick :floating:

=Self-Injury-Club
~fallencity:iconfallencity: Jun 16, 2006, 6:20:58 PM
hope it gets better, aye?

:hug:

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Flick :floating:

=Self-Injury-Club
~CorpseBoy:iconCorpseBoy: Jun 17, 2006, 3:47:40 AM
:-( Men arent all like that. Sometimes i feel the same about women...i guess were all the same in that sense. But anyway...i love it, it has a somber lightness, like the character and reader has just been left there, with nothing...It's beutiful.

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With a prompter in every cellar window whispering comebacks, shy people would always have the last laugh.
~fallencity:iconfallencity: Jun 19, 2006, 4:46:54 AM
i hope ur right!

thanks heaps!

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Flick :floating:

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~Icyblues:iconIcyblues: Jun 23, 2006, 3:38:37 AM
Yes, it does!
:hug:

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I'm not good with these things called words.