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Battered but not Broken by ~fallencity:iconfallencity:





I thought I needed him
I thought I needed
A man to pull me through
It wasn't true

My heart was battered
When he got to it
He picked it up
Brushed it off

Another day he threw it
It fell apart again
It lay in pieces on the floor
Once more

I thought I needed
A man to pick it up
I thought I needed
Help to heal my heart

Time passed on
And I look back
I see myself kneeling
Picking up those pieces

My heart is a little bruised
Battered dusty scarred
But it's almost whole again
Without a man

I thought I needed him
Thought I needed to be his
But what I needed
Was to be mine alone

Now I have a heart
I can share it
But I won't give it away
It's mine

I've learned a lesson:
Love is not to be
Made whole, but to be
Complimented, by another

Alone for a year
I've learned about me
And now I look down, I see
I'm no longer broken
©2006-2008 ~fallencity
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Submitted: October 11, 2006
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I came to the realisation the other day that I had picked myself up and moved on. My ex broke my heart a year ago and I've been single since - I've had the odd date etc, but nothing special. I realised that getting to where I am today is in large part my own doing, with a little bit of help from a psych. But I picked up the pieces, and I kept moving. That was truly empowering. So although this poem refers to bad stuff, its from a view point of having been emancipated from that pain.
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~Icyblues:iconIcyblues: Oct 25, 2006, 12:45:06 PM
Very strong poem. Very well written. Well done on the realisation, it takes me ages to realise...

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Love Will Tear Us Apart
~fallencity:iconfallencity: Oct 25, 2006, 5:15:59 PM
thanks. it has taken me ages to realise tho

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~Icyblues:iconIcyblues: Dec 20, 2006, 5:19:55 AM
Maybe we'll get better at realising one day!

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Love Will Tear Us Apart